Despite the darkness, there was a beauty in this land that was echoed through its stillness – as if it were an ancient world, still standing in the present day. There was a contrast between the motion of the water and the sense of timelessness that the distant trees procured through the scent of pine, tumbling down to the realm of man in a faint fog.


I must say I really liked the plot; it has great potential and is set up well for the second book.

A big fan of yours

I think you’ve laid a beautiful foundation in regards the plot.

A big fan of yours